Because a Semi-Colon is Not a Surgical Procedure

Once again, it’s that special day which encourages professional sign makers, business persons and elementary students to really try and learn how to use an apostrophe properly. It’s National Punctuation Day!


I just listened to the Punctuation Rap, (or you can listen to the funky blues version, if you want to actually understand the words — the kids who do the rap are cracking up and not quite as clear) and thus am full of love for the world of properly punctuating people in the blogosphere.

The rap is a part of program called Punctuation Playtime for first through sixth graders put together by the guy who put Punctuation Day on the calendar four years ago, Jeff Rubin. I expect he’s running around East Bay schools as Punctuation Man today. This whole thing makes me chuckle because it’s making me think of “Conjunction Junction.” And if you don’t know what I’m talking about, pretend you didn’t hear it…


Yesterday I read a piece in the Guardian about L.M. Montgomery — probably most of you have heard by now that the family of the Anne of Green Gables novelist have chosen to reveal that she died by a deliberate overdose at the age of sixty-seven. I have to admit that I was sort of stunned into silence by that — mainly because I’m not sure if it matters now. But I like the reasons given by the family:

Kate Macdonald Butler, daughter of Montgomery’s youngest son Stuart Macdonald, made the long-kept family secret public in an article for Canada’s Globe and Mail. “I have come to feel very strongly that the stigma surrounding mental illness will be forever upon us as a society until we sweep away the misconception that depression happens to other people, not us – and most certainly not to our heroes and icons,” she wrote.

Perhaps the legacy of what Anne gave to the rest of us gave her the courage to do that. If only Kate’s grandmother could have known.


Ooh! Check out the very cool bookmarks on Guys Lit Wire! Sa-weet!

I am so jealous that it’s not even funny. Everybody going to the Portland Kidlitosphere Conference, have fun! And don’t forget to write..!

Blurring the Lines

It was a buzz, and today it’s a launch. YA for Obama is a ning group started by “best-selling young adult authors,” according to a Condé Nast blog, who are concerned with creating a place for the under-18’s in the democratic process. Their goal? To get Mr. Obama elected.

It’s a social-networking site, and it’s open to everyone, even, curiously, people who don’t support the election of Mr. Obama, and sentient cheese life forms. Those best-selling authors include Holly Black, Judy Blume, Libby Bray, Meg Cabot and of course, the group’s founder, Maureen Johnson. There are really cool things on the site, including a link to The Living Room Candidate, which is a collection of scary political commercials since the dawn of televisions, and other spaces to discuss issues such as race and energy and how the economy is impacting people right now.

From many angles, this site seems pretty innocuous. I mean, it’s social networking, and we all like the social, yes? There’s a kind of sanguine bubbliness in the videos and posters, the slogan suggestions and the posters (and an eye-scalding overuse of the word “awesome”). Everything has a fun, positive vibe.

Except.
I’m not sure it IS positive.
I wonder about whether this site constitutes “undue influence” upon the young people at whom it is targeted.

Undue influence is about taking advantage of social position to influence someone to do or think something against what their will. It’s about using one’s authority to control people, really. It’s nasty – subtle and kind of crazy-making, really, because it’s hard to prove.


Undue influence is not as obvious as being forced to sign a contract at gunpoint — or under duress. Undue influence is more insidious, and subtle. It’s like being invited to your boss’s church, or having a college professor ask you on a date. It’s like your priest assuming you’ll vote a particular way because the parish would benefit from a certain person being in office. It’s taking a personal thing and making it someone else’s business, and it’s causing someone to do something they maybe wouldn’t have chosen to do on their own.

I know that this site intends to provide a place for people who aren’t yet voting age to enter into the democratic process, and use their creativity to help Mr. Obama get elected, and a venue like that is certainly a good thing. The content of the site isn’t what I wonder about. I do wonder whether we’re using our position as storytellers inappropriately. I wonder if we’re overstepping our role, and using that privilege as a platform from which to push political views.

In the early American days of big slogans and Manifest Destiny, there was a popular phrase: “…the hand that rocks the cradle is the hand that rules the world.” I prefer not to think of YA’ers as a faceless, nameless force that is ripe for manipulation and direction, even in the kindliest meant ways. When I write for young adults, I write to remind them that adolescence doesn’t last forever, and that they’re not alone in being basically ignored, condescended to, or disenfranchised. It might seem like a social networking site aimed at including YA’ers in the voting process is a positive and inclusive step, but are we including young adults in a conversation that they want to have? Or is this another way of playing politics and using technology to reach kids “where they live”? Somehow, writers inviting young adults to join them as they stump for a political candidate just doesn’t seem entirely …kosher.

The other day, Liz posted that she votes for herself in terms of sanity, and keeping her blog politics free. I think I vote for me, too, and for keeping secret ballots secret, differentiating between what is politically or morally right and staying the heck out of trying to mix my readers with my politics.

Just thinkin’ some thoughts this fine sunny Monday morning.


Please note that though this is a team blog, the opinions of one teammate are not necessarily those of the other member of the blogging team.

TBR3: A Tale of Two Cities – The Dark Before …?

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Book III – The Track of the Storm, Chapters 1-4

It’s the bottom of the ninth, kids. Hard to believe, but we’ll finish our scintillating coverage of A TALE OF TWO CITIES this week. And, I have to admit, I’m about ready to be finished. I’m seriously annoyed with Charles Darnay’s last move, and I still haven’t forgiven him for it. Probably Lucie will wriggle her brow a few times, and get over it, but me, I’m with Miss Pross, who will probably repudiate him and try and get her brother out of jail to marry Poor Lucie.

Well. There’s no help for it. The gaping maw of the revolution is before us, and we must go in. Brace yourselves: to the text!

Chapter 1 ~ In Secret
Oh, stupid, stupid, Charles. He travels onward to France, which is more perilous than usual. In everyday travel, one would have bad inns and badly shod horses; now it’s bad inns, bad horses and people waking you up at 3 a.m., telling you that they will escort you to France, and making you pay for it. And then, when you’re okay with that, calling you “the prisoner”.

The word “wife” seemed to serve as a gloomy reminder to Defarge, to say with sudden impatience, “In the name of that sharp female newlyborn, and called La Guillotine, why did you come to France?”

“You heard me say why, a minute ago. Do you not believe it is the truth?”

“A bad truth for you,” said Defarge, speaking with knitted brows, and looking straight before him.

“Indeed I am lost here. All here is so unprecedented, so changed, so sudden and unfair, that I am absolutely lost. Will you render me a little help?”

“None.” Defarge spoke, always looking straight before him.

SUDDEN!? UNFAIR? HELLO!? People have been dying for. Three. Years. Did he miss this!? Charles, carrying the letter from Monsieur Gabelle, seems still so …clueless. Granted, it’s maybe like how the rest of the world didn’t find out about the atrocities committed upon the Jews in WWII — maybe the British truly didn’t know. Dickens assumes this to be so. However, one would think the British knew enough to know that lives were being lost. Daily. Hourly. The king had been overthrown. Did they think revolution happened nicely?

At least Charles has the pride not to ask again. At some point, facing tyranny, one realizes that resistance is futile.

Oh, WHY did Charles think himself so special that this would not happen to him? Because Lucie of the Agile Brow had chosen him? Because he’d made it out of a accusation of treason before!?!? Did he now suppose himself to be magical?

*sigh*

Chapter 2 ~ The Grindstone
Poor Mr. Lorry. He’s in Paris, and of course, Tellson’s itself has his suitably horrified. First, there’s a plaster cupid peering down at the money. Next, there are mirrors, and the Tellson’ clerks are apt to dance — in public! — at any time. They’re French, and when they were there, they were shocking. But the clerks are gone and the people who put the money in are mostly imprisoned or beyond balancing their accounts ever again. Nothing can distract from the murderous bloodlust Mr. Lorry sees in the street. Jarvis Lorry is scared.

His fear — and trepidation — only get worse when Lucie and the Doctor show up — with MISS PROSS AND THEIR CHILD. (Hello!? Child welfare? We have a case for you… Whose idea was it to bring the child AND the nanny? I mean, does Lucie seriously still need her to corral that brow? And wasn’t Miss Pross of the opinion that she should always stay in England?!) Oddly, Mr. Lorry locks Lucie in a room briefly — apparently maybe the nanny is for HER — and gives Doctor Manette the 411. Because his Bastille street cred goes before him, he’s well loved in the city, and knows he can help Charles. He zips out without his hat to La Force, where Charles is being held, and doesn’t come back. And Lucie swoons. Because that’s helpful and stuff.

*sigh*

Chapter 3 ~ The Shadow

To this lodging he at once removed Lucie and her child, and Miss Pross: giving them what comfort he could, and much more than he had himself. He left Jerry with them, as a figure to fill a doorway that would bear considerable knocking on the head, and returned to his own occupations. A disturbed and doleful mind he brought to bear upon them, and slowly and heavily the day lagged on with him.

Mr. Lorry takes his job seriously. With the roving band of marauders in the streets, he realizes that he personally cannot sacrifice the bank for the silly people who have come to Paris. That he gives them Jerry is both amusing and touching. He’s not one of those people who will be easily killed, Jerry isn’t, but that Mr. Lorry would leave himself unprotected is poignant. Stupid Charles.


Monsieur DeFarge comes to see Mr. Lorry, and brings with him the merry duo: Mme. DeFarge and The Vengeance. M. DeFarge has a letter for Lucie from Charles, and she’s all kissing hands and joy about it — not seeming to really look at the people who have brought her the letter. MADAME DEFARGE IS FREAKING KNITTING. Does anyone else find this ominous?

You had better, Lucie,” said Mr. Lorry, doing all he could to propitiate, by tone and manner, “have the dear child here, and our good Pross. Our good Pross, Defarge, is an English lady, and knows no French.”

The lady in question, whose rooted conviction that she was more than a match for any foreigner, was not to be shaken by distress and danger, appeared with folded arms, and observed in English to The Vengeance, whom her eyes first encountered, “Well, I am sure, Boldface! I hope you are pretty well!” She also bestowed a British cough on Madame Defarge; but, neither of the two took much heed of her.

Oh, Miss Pross, I love you. I give a discreet and snide British cough in your honor. I won’t even ask what the heck a British cough is, just for you.

Dickens depicts the British as almost childlike in this section, or criminally unobservant. It’s still baffling to me. They’re in Paris. Lucie has been with her father all this time, surely all of the paper-checks between the Channel and Paris alerted them that something was different in France. Surely the idea that Charles had been imprisoned just for entering the country should have given Lucie some …idea of the gravity of the situation. But she still seems so grateful, so eager to kiss hands and beg the cold-hearted butchers for help. Charles, at least, caught on a little sooner.

(All right, Dickens. Stop writing the young women as stupid.)

Chapter 4 ~ Calm in Storm
In a surprising a reversal, Mr. Lorry finally realizes he no longer has to worry about Doctor Manette lapsing back into madness. The Doctor, knowing very well evil done unprovoked and without cause, is at home in providing succor to both the Upright Citizens Brigade masquerading under the flag of liberté, equalitié, fraternité — and death, and those who are the citizen’s victims. He’s not about to go mad. For once, what he’s gone through doesn’t make him a weak man, or a nutter about to go off and scandalize polite British society. He can do something for his daughter to help her, and he’s set on it.

However, it’s not easy, and I have to say I’m glad that Dickens doesn’t make it so. We might have been required to suspend our disbelief on some things, but the fact of how many died and how is filled in as fact.

— though I still have some major issues with the fact that no one told Lucie. She was seventeen when her father was “recalled to life.” She’s a married woman, at least in her mid-twenties. Can she grow up now? Please?

There was no pause, no pity, no peace, no interval of relenting rest, no measurement of time. Though days and nights circled as regularly as when time was young, and the evening and morning were the first day, other count of time there was none. Hold of it was lost in the raging fever of a nation, as it is in the fever of one patient. Now, breaking the unnatural silence of a whole city, the executioner showed the people the head of the king- and now, it seemed almost in the same breath, the bead of his fair wife which had had eight weary months of imprisoned widowhood and misery, to turn it grey.

France is washing to sea on a tide of blood that Doctor Manette cannot stem, and now Charles has been in prison for a year and a half. There’s nothing anyone can do.

I suppose Monsier Gabelle is dead by now. What a horrible irony.

Will Charles EVER get out of prison? Is Jeremiah Cruncher finding a side occupation ferrying corpses across the Channel? Is Miss Pross going to say something tart and acerbic to get everyone going again? Tune in next time as we continue THE BIG READ.

Because Da College, She Isna' Cheap

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Because Da College, She Isna’ Cheap

This is a public service announcement: College Isn’t Cheap.

Hello, People Who Know Seniors! mental_floss: Where Knowledge Junkies Get Their Fix , is giving away college MONEY. Listen to me now. ¡M-O-N-E-Y! And you don’t have to be a 4.0 — or even a 3.5 — to get it. mental_floss honors even those of us not on the honor roll. All you have to do is …want. Then, write.

The Contest: In 750 words or less, explain why you (as the most deserving person on the planet) should win a $10,000 prize for tuition/books in the fall of 2009. The contest is open to full-time students pursuing an undergraduate degree at an accredited two-year or four-year college or university in the U.S. or Canada in the fall of 2009. Essays must be original work and should reflect the tone of mental_floss magazine. Winning essays must be truly memorable. They should be easy-to-read, funny, quirky and creative without being pretentious. Just (we hope) like mental_floss magazine. The prizes will be awarded on the overall quality of your essay.

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Poetry Friday: A Shadow Borne Lightly

God in the Details
by Mike White

I’ve seen to it that ants
carry their dead

in the ceremonial style
of a great long poem

but the distances
are manageable

and how heavy
after all is an ant

when I am myself
a shadow borne

so lightly


Mike White is a Utah poet whose work has appeared in journals including Verse, Poetry, Margie, Fulcrum, The Antioch Review, The Iowa Review, The New Republic, and The Threepenny Review. I’m not able to find much more about him – but I’m looking.

Poetry Friday today is at author amok. Don’t miss Jules’ discovery of William Stafford’s elegant “prayer of a poem;” something you may find yourself reading over and over again.

TBR3: Insufferable Happiness, Insufferable Pain

It’s the Big Read: Are you reading?


Crivens! For a brief moment at the beginning of this section, I was quite moved to give Our Charles such a kicking! He was really making me nauseous — and I couldn’t help but wonder if he wasn’t perhaps just going a wee bit overboard on the Lucie is the Angel of the Home theme. WHEN was the story going to begin!? We were already a hundred pages in, and modern editors would be writhing in their seats and making big slash marks with their green (my editor uses that merciful shade) pens! But eventually, we got into the meat of it — and how.

Innocent leaves are being swept along in the tide, and unwise choices are being made. What are these people thinking!?!?!?. Ah, never mind now. To the text!

Book II ~ The Golden Thread,
Chapters 21 – 24

Chapter 21 ~ Echoing Footsteps
I just don’t REMEMBER this book being so… tooth-achingly sweet! Pah, for the 19th century sentimental view of women and motherhood and children! I’m in need of a thumping good dose of Mark Twain now. Dickens, my man, I thought better of you.*Sigh*

Ah, well. Our Lucie hath beget, and there is, in the house on the corner, the echoing pitter patter of tiny feet. Lucie is so happy she fears she might die — and when she’s pregnant, she has a rather maudlin imagination and fears that Charles will one day mourn her. Apparently that’s normal for the newly married. Anyway, there’s an ineffable sense of golden happiness — even when Lucie’s second Little Angel flies back to Heaven from whence he came, he is Good and Compassionate and not Sickly and Ailing and causing his parents pain and agony as he dies. Oh, no, he’s practically chirpy as he returns to his Maker, and even says to comfort Syd when he’s gone. ALL holy wee babies love Sydney Carton, aren’t all the children of the Agilely Browed attracted to dissolute drunks?

Dickens. Stop it. Now.

Syd is still being dragged along in Stryver’s wake as his “jackal.” Though married to a well-off widow, and the steppapa to three boys, Stryver is still just as stupid as ever, now telling the story of how Lucie set out to catch him, and how he evaded her. Stryver, then, is still a blowhard and a liar, but elsewhere the world is actually changing. There’s a run on Tellson’s bank. French people are desperately withdrawing and depositing monies, and Mr. Lorry and the dessicated husks at the bank are actually being required to work with some haste — which probably raises puffs of dust and arthritic creaking.

Mr. Lorry takes refuge at the home of the Manette’s, but meanwhile, back at the village…

“Come, then!” cried Defarge, in a resounding voice. “Patriots and friends, we are ready! The Bastille!”

With a roar that sounded as if all the breath in France had been shaped into the detested word, the living sea rose, wave on wave, depth on depth, and overflowed the city to that point. Alarm-bells ringing, drums beating, the sea raging and thundering on its new beach, the attack begun.

Jacques Three — the bloodthirsty one — and DeFarge race into the Bastille, and then shove a turnkey ahead of them to One Hundred and Five, North Tower. It is Alexandre Manette’s old cell, and they tear it apart — seeming to be in search of something…? Not finding it, they burn the cell, and go away, down to the main floors, to print their blood-stained footprints throughout the streets of Paris.

Chapter 22 ~ The Sea Still Rises
Saint Antoine has changed:

The raggedest nightcap, awry on the wretchedest head, had this crooked significance in it: “I know how hard it has grown for me, the wearer of this, to support life in myself; but do you know how easy it has grown for me, the wearer of this, to destroy life in you?” Every lean bare arm, that had been without work before, had this work always ready for it now, that it could strike. The fingers of the knitting women were vicious, with the experience that they could tear. There was a change in the appearance of Saint Antoine; the image had been hammering into this for hundreds of years, and the last finishing blows had told mightily on the expression.

It’s not the men who have changed so much. Dickens, squarely showing himself a man of his times, mostly fears for the changes in the women, who are now insanely overwrought and murderous, tearing at themselves and screaming for blood, and dropping into indelicate swoons — from which the men save them.

Apparently, a woman with agency to act is A Very Scary Dame in the 19th century! It’s interesting how much better the men come off in this — even as everyone is killing everyone else. And, so, the rabble of Saint Antoine is roused, and the blood of le bête noir, — littered with grass — flows in the streets…

Chapter 23 ~ Fire Rises
Road mender Jacques is still working — though who might be paying him now, I can’t tell. The more things have changed in the village, the more they stay the same; though blood has been shed and tyranny roused, people are still starving. They continue to blame Monseigneur for everything — the weather, the crops, the state of the world — where previously he was held up as an example of worthy Class.

The road mender is working in the dust when he meets another Jacques. They exchange ritual signals, the new Jacques, dressed in wooden shoes and animal skins, sleeps for a few hours through hailstorms and sun, and then they part ways at sunset, the road mender going to the fountain in the middle of town, and the other Jacques going two leagues beyond there.

The entire village looks out in the darkness at the old chateau, and four unknown persons come from North, South, East and West… and it burns. The poor servant left behind tries to rouse everyone to help him fight the fire, but no one cares anymore about preserving things for the Marquis, and one wonders how Monsieur Gabelle has missed that things have changed with regard to the chateau and the village! He spends the night on the roof, preparing to throw himself down and crush a few people at his death if they break down his door.

The night of fire isn’t successful everywhere, but it’s successful enough. People all over France realize that things are changing.

Chapter 24 ~ Drawn to the Loadstone Rock
I had to look up “loadstone.” I thought it might be a cornerstone, but no, it’s just loadestone spelled wrong. Or, *cough* a spelling variation. (Whatever, wrong is wrong, Dickens.)

Wee Lucie is now three six years old, and for three years, the house on the corner has been awash in the bloody echoes of the city across the sea. I love how Dickens describes the glittering class as leaving France — as if Monseigneur had tried for eons to raise the devil and was scared to death when he actually managed it. The royals are all gone, and only their spirits remain. Many of those spirits haunt Tellson’s, which is obliging to those formerly rich. It has turned into a meeting place for impoverished Frenchman, who hear news of still wealthy French aristocrats, and hope for help. We find ourselves at this French intelligence bureau and discover that Mr. Lorry is going to Paris… for the bank.

Charles Darnay is remonstrating with him, gently suggesting that he’s too old to go, but thinking himself someone with an intelligent voice, to whom people would listen. I have to say that I sort of rolled my eyes at this; last time he visited the Marquis didn’t convince him that a.) there was a problem, and b.) people were no longer listening!? Hello? Jarvis Lorry rightly scolds him for even thinking about going to France, and insists that he is going on this one last journey for Tellson’s… and taking Jerry Cruncher with him.

……!!!!!

(On one hand, I think the DeFarges may at last have met their match. On the other… Boy howdy, talk about going to hell and taking various demons with you. Jerry Cruncher!? Ah, well, better the devil you know. Or don’t know about. Or something. At least Mrs. C. will get a break.)

Idiocy runs rampant in Britain about the revolution; Stryver remains, of course, at the forefront of idiocy, and is foaming at the mouth about ungrateful peasants. Darnay sticks around to try and put in a word of sense, but he’s suffering himself under a great attack of stupidity.

Doctor Manette has made him promise to keep his true name a secret between them both — because he’s as wise as oceans are deep, despite his occasional attacks of madness, and Darnay is, in his semblance of sanity, quite frankly a fool. Doctor Manette foresaw these troubles, and knew that for Lucie’s happiness to be secure that Darnay would have to turn his back on being Marquis D’Aulnais — but of course, when a letter comes addressed to him at Tellson’s, he says he knows the man. Stryver blows hard about Darnay knowing him, and the type of alleged gentleman who would leave his property to the murderous band of cowards, and essentially sputters that he’s probably heading them up, and killing off other aristocrats.

Okay: you know it, and I know it: Monsieur le Stupide is going to Paris.

WHY he can’t just — let things go is beyond me. Okay, so there’s a letter from Monsieur Gabelle, who is a prisoner in the Abbaye and who is resentful that he’s going to be killed merely for being a family servant — okay. One would wish to do all in one’s power to take care of that. And granted, yes, the house should have been sold and the servant discharged eons ago — who pays these people to keep working and collecting rents after the Master of the House has been murdered? Why did the cycle of life keep going on, even when there was no one to grasp from Saint Antoine and squeeze it to death? Is it really human nature to stay in the shadow of slavery when the cell doors are opened? Dickens is asking us to stretch with him, so, okay: we’re stretched. That idiotic man is going to Paris.

And he’s not telling his wife or her father until he’s gone.

Right.
Because there’s no point in making a suicide attempt if you don’t leave a note.
Pah. I am flat disgusted.

Tune in next time to see just how many pages are devoted to Lucie’s trembling swooning, the doctor’s rejuvenated madness, and her wrinkled brow. Count the paragraphs and see how long it takes everyone to run after Charles and risk death by maddened mob and guillotine.

Books Worth Knowing

A friendly note from a cool person at Flux let me know that A LA CARTE is being featured at the Illinois Library Association’s Reading Conference. Along with my book are some other tomes of awesome, including Marla Frazee’s well received A Couple of Boys Have the Best Week Ever (here’s a Just One More Book podcast from last year), Neil Gaiman’s The Graveyard Book, Rapunzel’s Revenge, by Shannon Hale, and Siobahn Dowd’s The London Eye Mystery, and Paula Yoo’s Good Enough.

I’m in fantastically good company. Thanks Illinois librarians!

TBR3: A Tale of Two Cities: Selflessness & Survival

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Detailed, Aquafortis mentioned, and yes, Dickens is that. I note my chapter recaps getting longer and longer and LONGER, so I attempt herewith to reign them IN. To the text!

Book 2: The Golden Thread, Chapters 17-20

Ch. 17 ~ One Night

I think the word that best describes this chapter is selflessness. The 19th century penchant for sentiment-drenched moments of epiphanies between friends is here clearly seen, as Lucie and her father exchange remembrances the night before Lucie’s wedding. Yes, it’s slightly cloying, to my personal sense of familial affection, but it’s also sweet. Lucie clearly doesn’t want to abandon her father, and her father, the esteemed “Doctor of Beauvais” does not want her to waste her life nursing him. He actually talks about his past here, more than previously, which gives Lucie chills.

“My child, you did see him, and it is Charles. If it had not been Charles, it would have been another. Or, if it had been no other, I should have been the cause, and then the dark part of my life would have cast its shadow beyond myself, and would have fallen on you.”

It was the first time, except at the trial, of her ever hearing him refer to the period of his suffering. It gave her a strange and new sensation while his words were in her ears; and she remembered it long afterwards.


The Doctor is well pleased that Lucie is to be married, and their household undergoes only the slightest change; Lucie will simply take the rooms above where her father lodges, so she will always be near him if he needs her, but has her own home as well. No word on where Miss Pross will stay.

So, this is the night before Lucie marries. I still recall that on the morning of the wedding, Charles will tell the doctor his real name. Despite all being restful and peaceful in the light of the full moon, I don’t think that will go well.

Ch. 18 ~ Nine Days
“You were a bachelor in your cradle.” Now, there’s a line to which there’s no easy comeback! Ah, my dear Miss Pross is back — sniffling and slightly ferocious and completely necessary to render the wedding not completely bile-inducing. I love how she and Mr. Jarvis get along, and though she tells him he was cut out before birth to be a bachelor, I think she has a wee soft spot for him. After all, the woman loves hats — can’t dislike a man who likes his wigs…

As it turns out, Pross and her ferocity are hardly needed to keep the chapter from being a bilge-fest; Doctor Manette came out from talking to Charles looking quite pale and haunted, and the moment Lucie’s carriage drove away, he fell into his old madness… for nine whole days.

And dear Mr. Lorry, for the first time in his life, took time off from Tellson’s to watch him, in hopes that he’d come back to sanity.


Aaargh! WHY did Doctor Manette wait until the very last minute for Charles to tell him the truth? And WHY did he never tell Lucie? I remember in the last chapter, he talked a lot about having a son to revenge him, and a son to know his story… and a daughter to show him her house and children. Okay, so there’s my answer. Lucie of the Agile Brow is obviously no bloody help. Hmph.

Ch. 19 ~ An Opinion
…and then, suddenly SNAP! And everything is back to normal. Sort of.

I grow to respect Mr. Lorry more and more, in these chapters. Before, I thought him a dry stick, a clueless old duffer, to press Miss Pross as to the reasons for Doctor Manette’s never speaking of his mental illness. Now he shows himself to be the soul of tact and courage as he broaches the difficult subject, in the name of “a friend,” and allows the poor Doctor Manette to know that he has, in fact, slipped his cogs and gone shoe-making mad once again.

“Now, did you ever see him,” asked the Doctor, distinctly and collectedly, though in the same low voice, “engaged in that pursuit originally?”

“Once.”

“And when the relapse fell on him, was he in most respects -or in all respects- as he was then?”

“I think in all respects.”

19th century readers were familiar with Bedlam Hospital, and its horrors. Dickens must have been deliberately freaking out his readers – and trust me, even sans Bedlam, it’s working. Poor Doctor Manette. And the worst things of all is that he doesn’t remember what set him off… and Mr. Lorry has guessed very wrongly indeed what it was.

On the night of the day on which he left the house, Mr. Lorry went into his room with a chopper, saw, chisel, and hammer, attended by Miss Pross carrying a light. There, with closed doors, and in a mysterious and guilty manner, Mr. Lorry hacked the shoemaker’s bench to pieces, while Miss Pross held the candle as if she were assisting at a murder for which, indeed, in her grimness, she was no unsuitable figure. The burning of the body (previously reduced to pieces convenient for the purpose) was commenced without delay in the kitchen fire; and the tools, shoes, and leather, were buried in the garden. So wicked do destruction and secrecy appear to honest minds, that Mr. Lorry and Miss Pross, while engaged in the commission of their deed and in the removal of its traces, almost felt, and almost looked, like accomplices in a horrible crime.

Ch. 20 ~ A Plea
Ah, the darling and dissolute Sydney returns! I adore Sydney. I can’t help it. He’s so honest. I aspire to Miss Pross’ ferocity and Mr. Carton’s honesty — to go around and tell people, “No, you don’t like me. And I don’t like you. Let’s get over ourselves!” is kind of refreshing, if a bit terrifying. And now he’s extended his terrifying uncouth manners to chide Mr. Darnay about using figures of speech instead of saying what he really means.

“Ah!” said Carton, with a careless wave of his hand, as if he waved that away. “On the drunken occasion in question (one of a large number, as you know), I was insufferable about liking you, and not liking you. I wish you would forget it.”

“I forgot it long ago.”

“Fashion of speech again! But, Mr. Darnay, oblivion is not so easy to me, as you represent it to be to you. I have by no means forgotten it, and a light answer does not help me to forget it.”


Charles: Sydney! Of course we’re friends.
Sydney: No. We’re not. But we should try now.
Love it. Although, it really brings the questions as to why Syd wants to be his friend… for Pure Lucie’s sake? Lucie, of course, goes all Eyebrows and Concerned on her husband’s behind when he says even the tiniest thing about Syd, and he has to kiss her dear, sweet widdle compassionate tears away. Gak. Lucie still wears me out, but at least she’s safely married now, and maybe we can focus on something other than her forehead for a chapter or two…

Tune in next time to see if Doctor Manette rebuilds his cobbler’s bench, if Miss Pross should take to more outrageous millinery choices, and if Mr. Lorry might declare himself to her once and for all…

TBR3: A Tale of Two Cities – Sighing for Versailles

Are you reading?

It occurs to me that we now are thoroughly acquainted with the two cities of which this novel is a tale. Saint Antoine and Soho; Paris and London. In both cities there is graft, theft, degeneracy (which is a great 19th century word) and poverty. In both cities there are good people living above average lives, and average people living lives that could be considered thoroughly dicey. Perhaps Dickens’ point is that this selfsame story could have taken place… in either location.

This brainwave came to me because the characters continue to amaze. At times I root for them, then, in the next page, I pretty thoroughly hate them. That’s… like real human beings. They’re complicated and really hard to pin down.

Dickens. A master novelist kind of guy.

Onward ~ to the text!
Book 2: The Golden Thread, Chapters 13-16

Ch. 13 ~ The Fellow of No Delicacy
*sigh*
Lucie Manette, three, Universe, zip.
It was inevitable that Sydney Carton, poor moody, melancholic Syd, would come admire Lucie’s charms next. At least it wasn’t with an eye towards securing said charms for his Eeyore-ing self. He once called her a golden-haired doll, and apparently he chooses to use her as small children use dolls — to talk to, and to tell a secret. They have a thoroughly depressing conversation:

She was pale and trembling. He came to her relief with a fixed despair of himself which made the interview unlike any other that could have been holden.

“If it had been possible, Miss Manette, that you could have returned the love of the man you see before you- self-flung away, wasted, drunken, poor creature of misuse as you know him to be- he would have been conscious this day and hour, in spite of his happiness, that he would bring you to misery, bring you to sorrow and repentance, blight you, disgrace you, pull you down with him. I know very well that you can have no tenderness for me; I ask for none; I am even thankful that it cannot be.”

Poor Lucie.
For the first time, I feel kind of sorry for her, and feel that mighty brow might actually be creased in genuine confusion. Imagine some guy coming by and saying, “Basically I’m wrecked over you, but I’m not good enough for you, I know you’ll never like me, I’m glad you can’t, but for a moment I considered trying hard enough to be better than awful for you, now let’s never talk about this again.”

Awkweird!!
At least Syd got it off of his chest.
(I guess.)

Ch. 14 ~ The Honest Tradesman
Ah, Dickens, Dickens. Such irony, using the word “honest.”

Here we see Jeremiah Cruncher, heathen rustic (!), surveying the world from his stool in front of Tellson’s, along with Jeremiah Junior, who sees a funeral procession coming, and …cheers, the little ghoul. He gets a thick ear for his pains, but then his father goes off and joins the rowdies who kick out the mourner and take over the hearse of the alleged spy. With a bear processing along out front, they sing and cheer and dump the body at the morgue — and then rush off to accuse other people of being spies, and kick the crap out of them.

Right.

Somehow it doesn’t surprise me at all that this Cruncher guy is in the thick of the ignorant behavior of the mob. Not at all. His ignorance continues at home — where he accuses his wife of praying for him again (showing himself to be a True Believer, only somehow of a backwards sort), not feeding up Jerry Junior and basically bullies and threatens everyone for an interminable length of time, until he orders them to bed.

Meanwhile, Jerry Jr. turns out to be a dab hand at the spying game. He’s faked sleeping, knowing his Dad is going “fishing” that night. He follows him and sees him meet with another mysterious fisherman, and then they go to the graveyard…and fish out something horrible, to poor Jerry’s eyes.

It hid in doorways too, rubbing its horrible shoulders against doors, and drawing them up to its ears, as if it were laughing. It got into shadows on the road, and lay cunningly on its back to trip him up. All this time it was incessantly hopping on behind and gaining on him, so that when the boy got to his own door he had reason for being half dead. And even then it would not leave him, but followed him upstairs with a bump on every stair, scrambled into bed with him, and bumped down, dead and heavy, on his breast when he fell asleep.

Jeremiah Cruncher returns home without whatever it is he was after while grave-robbing, and he’s in a fit. He abuses his wife some more, and goes to bed, but is later cheered by the sly comments of Jerry Junior, who asks what a Resurrection Man might be, and comments that he wishes he might be one someday. His father tells him ponderously to mind that he “dewelop” his talents, and finds himself much soothed to think that his smart boy will make up for the boy’s mother.

(At this time, I’d like to say that it is my sincerest hope that Mrs. C. does something really awful to that man.)

Ch. 15 ~ Knitting
Boy, the drinks flow early in Saint Antoine. Six a.m., and Mme. DeFarge is already up and knitting and passing out very bad wine, apparently a sort that makes people more ill-tempered than ever. Nobody seems to notice M. DeFarge’s absence, and when he finally appears, there’s a general stir of almost… happiness. He’s brought a man with him called Jacque, who is a road mender, and young and poor. Jacques has a glass of wine, eats some black bread, and soon retires to an apartment M. DeFarge is happy to show him. Of course, it’s the same apartment where Dr. Manette convalesced after his imprisonment.

Crazily enough, everyone in the apartment is named Jacques. I mean, okay: this is France. But the fact that they’re numbered Jacques clues me in to the fact that they’re code names. And then I remember: the name signed by the Marquis’ executioner… was also Jacques.

Ooh.

This Road Mender Jacques tells Jacques 1-4 about the guy he saw on the bottom of the Marquis’ coach that night. And then he tells about how the guy was arrested. Sadly, it was the father of the child who the Marquis’ coach and horses killed, or so it’s assumed by the authorities. Despite M. DeFarge’s seeking a stay of execution from the King, explaining what had happened with his son — for which he is beaten by the guardsmen and soldiers — Gaspard is tormented, imprisoned, and hung — above the fountain in the town, which poisons it for the whole village.

The Jacques dismiss Road Mender Jacque, and pass judgment. Doomed to destruction, they decide, and write it down.

And then, wisely, one of the Jacques wonders if they should be writing down anything. The wine shop owner calms them, and reminds them that the registrar is Mme. DeFarge, who knits the records in a pattern only she can read — which explains her constant composed stitching.

The road mender is unnerved by her knitting, and shocked when she brings it in the carriage and into the public sphere on their trip to Versailles. Not surprisingly, after an explanation, the newest Jacques finds her work just that bit more terrifying:

“You work hard, madame,” said a man near her.

“Yes,” answered Madame Defarge; “I have a good deal to do.”

“What do you make, madame?”

“Many things.”

“For instance-“

“For instance,” returned Madame Defarge, composedly, “shrouds.”

Okay, yikes, lady.

And then, in one of the most succinct and condescending conversations ever, Mme. DeFarge cheerfully tells Road Mender Jacques that he’s a royalty whore, that he’d cheer for anything with enough bright lights and color, and that if he could have the shiniest dolly or the brightest bird for himself, he’d pick the prettiest one.

“You have seen both dolls and birds to-day,” said Madame Defarge, with a wave of her hand towards the place where they had last been apparent; “now, go home!”

Ch. 16 ~ Still Knitting
So, at last, the DeFarges go home, and Road Mender Jacques goes his way, to look at the chateau of the Marquis. The DeFarges are stopped at the police station; the policeman looks over their papers and exchanges a bit of information with M. DeFarge — mainly that there’s a new guy in town, and he’s a spy. Mme. DeFarge asks for a description of him, and it’s detailed — she’s quite pleased.

M. DeFarge takes the news with a bit of discouragement; his actions on behalf of Gaspard are probably the reason the spy is coming to town. Mme. DeFarge simply makes note of the man’s name and appearance, and says he will have to be “registered.”

I am reminded of Lord and Lady MacBeth in reading this chapter. The DeFarges — though plotting — are so loving to each other. M. DeFarge paces and watches his wife’s pecuniary economy admiringly; Mme. DeFarge, in her brisk, acerbic way, watches him pace and yanks him out of his halfheartedness and encroaching depression.

“How long,” demanded madame, composedly, “does it take to make and store the lightning? Tell me.”

Defarge raised his head thoughtfully, as if there were something in that too.

“It does not take a long time,” said madame, “for an earthquake to swallow a town. Eh well! Tell me how long it takes to prepare the earthquake?”

“A long time, I suppose,” said Defarge.

“But when it is ready, it takes place, and grinds to pieces everything before it. In the meantime, it is always preparing, though it is not seen or heard. That is your consolation. Keep it.”

At first, I thought that the rose that Mme. DeFarge had next to her the following day, in the fly-ridden wine shop, was from her husband, in thanks for her supportiveness. I had briefly forgotten with whom I was dealing! These are revolutionaries! A rosebud in a lapel or, in this case, in Mme. DeFarge’s high hair, is a SIGN, and when Mme. DeFarge puts hers on, the wine shop empties… except for a newcomer.

“Good day, monsieur.”

She said it aloud, but added to herself, as she resumed her knitting: “Hah! Good day, age about forty, height about five feet nine, black hair, generally rather handsome visage, complexion dark, eyes dark, thin, long and sallow face, aquiline nose but not straight, having a peculiar inclination towards the left cheek which imparts a sinister expression! Good day, one and all!”

The spy has been so well described that Mme. DeFarge is on to him in a second. (The second major clue is that he says the cognac’s good — and of course, it’s not.) For awhile, Mme. DeFarge chats with him and admits nothing, and then M. DeFarge arrives — and he’s really not as good at the whole Spy v. Spy thing as his ruthless lady. He doesn’t jump when the spy calls him Jacques — which gave ME a turn — he just tells him that’s not his name. The spy persists, acting like he knows all manner of things, but no one bites.

They do a sort of James Bond sort of wrangling — the spy trying to get them to admit things, the DeFarges turning bland ears to all of his comments — until he strikes a nerve, and tells them that Mam’selle Manette is going to marry the nephew of the evil Marquis. Soon afterward, Spy Barsad leaves, and M. DeFarge expresses his disbelief that Charles Darnay — D’Aulnais — could possibly be marrying Manette’s daughter, when Doctor Manette was so ill-treated by the government. M. DeFarge hopes for Lucie Manette’s sake that Charles keeps the heck out of France.

Mme. DeFarge, meanwhile, just knits in Charles Darnay’s name into her register!

Her husband smoked at his door, looking after her with admiration. “A great woman,” said he, “a strong woman, a grand woman, a frightfully grand woman!”

Oh, dear. “Frightfully” is right.