Poetry Friday: Blunted Pleasures

“The Necessary Brevity of Pleasures” by Samuel Hazo, from A Flight to Elsewhere. © Autumn House Press, 2005.

The Necessary Brevity of Pleasures

Prolonged, they slacken into pain

or sadness in accordance with the law

of apples.

One apple satisfies.

Two apples cloy.

Three apples

glut.

Call it a tug-of-war between enough and more

than enough, between sufficiency

and greed, between the stay-at-homers

and globe-trotting see-the-worlders.

Like lovers seeking heaven in excess,

the hopelessly insatiable forget

how passion sharpens appetites

that gross indulgence numbs.

Result?

The haves have not

what all the have-nots have

since much of having is the need

to have.

Even my dog

knows that – and more than that.

He slumbers in a moon of sunlight,

scratches his twitches and itches

in measure, savors every bite

of grub with equal gratitude

and stays determinedly in place

unless what’s suddenly exciting

happens.

Viewing mere change

as threatening, he relishes a few

undoubtable and proven pleasures

to enjoy each day in sequence

and with canine moderation.

They’re there for him in waiting,

and he never wears them out.


Only one kind of scale is beautiful, and it’s the kind you don’t step on. I wonder if anyone can really live with moderation that closely, never having to worry about the ‘slackening’ into excess. If one only ate or drank what one really wanted, would one, in fact, be immune to the desire to overdo? Somehow, that doesn’t fit into human nature that I’ve observed. BUT. It is true that absence sharpens appetite, for sure. Robin puts up with her occasional cravings for the ‘C’ food group — Cheese, Chips and Chocolate — but she’s almost five inches taller than the average woman. Short women must find their appetites elsewhere… hm. Definitely a point to ponder.

I especially like how the snake seems to shimmer in the stanza next to the apples. I imagine Lucifer was even more beautiful… which seems unfair. I love apples and snakes. I was doomed from the start.

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