Poets, Audience and …Denim.

Huzzah! Poetry People everywhere are celebrating National Poetry Month. More celebratory than most are Gregory K. from GottaBook who has an original poem-of-the-day subscription service, Elaine at Wild Rose Reader who has an awesome contest going on, Cloudscome who is posting a haiga (haiku and image) every day at A Wrung Sponge and the Whidbey Writers Workshop whose Students’ Choice contest this month is for short poetry, and includes a cash prize. (Their writer’s workshop blog is quite a resource for writers.) We’ll be introducing the Poetry Princesses this month — stay tuned as soon All Shall Be Revealed…


While I am sort of sick of hearing about Elizabeth Gilbert (apologies to everyone who just LOVES her book) I was happy to find out that her sister is Catherine Murdock Gilbert… the YA author who wrote Dairy Queen and its sequels. Cool, no? Putting aside Elizabeth Gilbert’s meteoric rise to fame, the Oprah-bump that Eat, Pray, Love received etc. ad nauseum, ad infinitum, the really cool thing about her that The Violets have zeroed in on is how she wrote her book. She wrote it to ONE person, a friend who was troubled, and whom Gilbert felt would benefit from hearing about how her life had changed from her travels and various interactions with nations and people. Just one person. The whole novel was a letter.

In my MFA craft classes and in my writing group, the topic has often turned to audience. Who are you writing for? one of us will ask the other when we’re not sure the story is communicating clearly to its intended readers. We often debate whether or not it’s important to have an audience, a target toward which to aim the appeal of the story. Some of us try to write for everyone — adults, teens, middle graders, small children. Others of us consider this futile and just try to write for ourselves.

There has to be middle ground.

Being all things to all people never works in life, not to mention in writing. But writing in consideration of an audience seems scary — what if the audience is made up of hostile critics who don’t respond to your work in the way that you want? — Picturing yourself writing to a sea of unknown faces may not work, but Gilbert’s idea of just writing to one …is ponder-worthy, and maybe even a tiny bit magical.

What an idea: communication. One to one.


readergirlzTons of people knit little hats and donate soft toys and stickers for kids in Children’s Hospitals. But, if you’re sixteen, those things really aren’t aimed for you. What you really need is a BOOK. Books are portals that open onto new worlds, bring entertainment, distraction, and sometimes can help blunt the pain. If you can’t avoid the hospital, at least there should be tons of books there, no? Rock the Drop, people. April 17th. Go see the readergirlz and get involved.


It’s NOT a joke: effervescent novelist, Carrie Jones… is running for Maine State Legislature. Whoa! AND we have the same birthday. Which is a coolness unto itself. Go, Carrie, go, Maine! Whoo!

All RIGHT… Because it’s …traditional this first day of April, I have to include some weirdness- so, here are things I WISH were complete jokes, via Ypulse in the last couple of days: Paris Hilton, inspiring role model to young girls. What. Ev. Er. And …Christian… jeans. No, really.

Happy April.

The Literature of Longing

This morning I was reminded of how our best writing takes place from a sense of longing. The Writer’s Almanac today made note of the fact that it’s Kate DiCamillo’s birthday. “She spent most of her childhood in Florida, but after college she moved to Minnesota to work for a book wholesaler… That first winter in Minnesota was one of the coldest on record, and DiCamillo missed her hometown in Florida horribly. She also desperately wanted a dog, but couldn’t have one because her apartment building didn’t allow dogs. So she began writing a story about a stray dog that helps a 10-year-old girl adjust to life in a new town…” and we know the rest of the story from there.

On the tail end of this very cold, wet, miserable winter, I can only imagine the author’s horror. Snow is pretty — when you don’t ever have to go outside, or are only visiting it temporarily. I imagine that after growing up in Florida, it must have seemed impossible, yet Kate DiCamillo found room in her mind to create a place where she wanted to be, and people she wanted to be with. And she found herself a dog.

Is your writing real?
Is it so heartfelt that it’s part of your inner world translated to paper? It seems that stories like these are the best things to read, and the most worthwhile to write.

A story I wrote features an older character who changed and grew with the novel until she was a major player along with the teens in the story. I really enjoyed rounding out the character and including her, because I enjoyed rewriting, in a small way, my actual history. I created a relationship like the one I very much wished for with my own grandmother, and that character has attracted favorable comment from many people.

It may seem a little… weird and needy to rewrite the world to your specifications, making yourself the heroine of all encounters. More importantly, it can be completely boring — keeping in mind the writer’s adage that Just Because It Happened To You Doesn’t Make It Interesting. There’s a difference between writing out your own personal history and personalizing a story by writing a real emotion. It’s a worthwhile bit of digging, to find something real.


Shrinking Violets has a few things to say on introverts vs. extroverts from the book The Introvert Advantage. Most notable to me is the assertion that extroverts “adapt more quickly to time-zone changes than introverts.” Also, extravert’s test performances were improved by receiving praise. This is some really fascinating stuff — I imagine it’s very valuable for parents, too, not to mention writers who have to figure out how to manage the public side of the field. Thanks, Violets!

NPR’s Morning Edition discovers comic books. Comic book audiences are …different, Joss Whedon discovers. “You can evoke ire that you’ve never dreamed of in TV.” Yeah… Ire. Controversy. Whatever you want to call it…

WRITING CONTEST ALERT

Aerin @ In Search of Giants is hosting an April Fool’s Writing Contest! It’s easy — because all you have to do is finish a story. Do you love yourself some Mad Libs? Or those ‘Choose Your Own Adventure’ books? Go to the site, read the story starter which has been presented by Writer At Work, and — finish it.

Prizes are subjective, of course, but there will be a $20 SuperCertificate to the author of Writer At Work‘s favorite ending, one Readers’ Choice $20 SuperCertificate and one $10 random lottery prize SuperCertificate by random lottery.

Writerly Ruminating: Will You Sign? Will You Not?

What’s the good word? It’s National Grammar Day! Now, off you go, diagram a sentence for fun…


After reading about Sara’s most excellent news, I happened across the Guardian blog’s Sarah Weinman‘s piece on the devolution of her love affair with book signings. After working at a bookstore, trying to control the line speed and limit the number of people only seeking signatures for resale value, it all fell apart for her, and now, she actually turns down offers of signatures from authors on the basis that it doesn’t mean anything to her — and pretends a connection between an author and reader that does not exist, and yes, she told an author his signature meant nothing to her, to his face. Ooh.
This morning I got a note from my publicist asking me if I’ll be home to do a book event at a bookstore “in my neck of the woods” (an independent that I hadn’t heard of until I did a quick Google) in August, and I hemmed and hawed and said of course I’d be available. (Saying “Yes” is part of the trick, right Sara?) But now that I’ve said yes, I’m (getting hives?) wondering… what it means to have a signed book. I bump this question to the well-traveled Robin Brande and to others of you who schmooze and meet/greet on a regular basis. Especially when you’re first starting out, what’s the point of signing books? What does it mean? Does it really confer value? Booksellers, book event people, what do you think? Would a writer’s time be better spent doing something else when meeting the public? I’d like to hear from the book-signing junkies, too. What does this mean to you?


Meanwhile, the the AP seems shocked that children’s book art is… big news. Um. Could’ve asked Jules and Eisha that one. Have you seen that they’re now interviewing up and coming picture book people now? How cool is that?

This is a Freebie I found via the mental_floss blog: Story Online — children’s books read by actors and the occasional ex vice president. Also check out ten of the top chemistry videos of all time. Watch things blow up, melt down, and transmute into amazing colors while you have your coffee.

Cheers!

Born To Set Margins

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Happy Weekend!
Just a few dispatches from booknerd central:

Via SF Signal, those who review SF/F books will want to take note of a writer’s project. S.M. Duke requests: What I’m asking is this: For every book you read in the SF or F genre, take a note of which ethnic, religious, social groups are present within a work in a significant way. What this means is if the main character or a significant character is White, Black, or Asian, then write that down. The same applies to religions and significant social groups (feminists, ACLU types, etc.). They must be significant presences, not just a mention. If there is a strong Catholic presence, say so. If you don’t know what religion is present, but there is one, just say unknown…I’d like to address gender too. Mention main characters that are male or female and secondary, but significant characters that are male or female (make them separate to differentiate). This will allow me to gather as much data as I can on this.

A lot of time is spent talking about racial disparities in literature, especially SF/F. Could it be that someone now is going to do something about it? Hmmm!

Meanwhile, Jen Robinson now has eyes!

Guest Blogger: Sherri L. Smith!!

We’re so VERY excited to introduce YA author Sherri L. Smith!

Sherri is the author of Lucy the Giant, a novel about a tall girl from the immense state of Alaska who tries to lose herself and her past in the wilds — and finds out what it means to have someone care enough to find you. Lucy’s story was Sherri’s first novel, and one of our all-time favorite Under Radar Recommendations from last summer.

Sherri’s other novels include the 2009 Louisiana Young Readers’ Choice Award nominee, Sparrow, a novel about a young woman coming to terms with losing her “real” family and taking the risk to create her own. Sherri’s most recent novel is today’s highlighted middle grade title, Hot, Sour, Salty, Sweet. Ana Shen’s incredibly stressful, terrible, horribly funny 8th grade graduation day is filled with too much family, too little time, grudges, grumpiness, growth and acceptance — and a little bit of romance, too. Hot, Sour, Salty, Sweet lands in bookstores today!

Sherri has graciously agreed to be our guest blogger today, and A. Fortis and I are happy to join the conversation. We encourage you to join in, too, as Sherri has graciously provided us a copy of her book to give away in a random drawing! We’ll be choosing one name at random from all those who comment, so don’t forget to take your chance!

And now for the good part!


Black and White and Read All Over by Sherri L. Smith

Last fall, I taught my first writing class at a local university extension program. Several of my students asked me if it was okay to write outside of their ethnicity. Could a white woman write a convincing Latina pre-teen? Should an African-American woman write about a white girl, or for that matter, a white boy? As an African-American woman about to publish a novel about a Chinese-/African-American girl, my answer on all counts was “Yes, yes, yes!” This class of mine witnessed the birth of several young adult novels that will no doubt one day be sold as “multicultural.” But, let’s get one thing straight—multicultural is a made-up word. The proverbial “Great American Novel” by its very name is a multicultural novel—America is made up of too many different peoples for it to be otherwise.

A.F.: This is definitely something that comes up in writing classes—and I’m so pleased that your answer was “Yes!”—when usually, imagination seems to be discouraged in favor of “write what you know,” and, in extreme cases, even knowledge is discouraged in favor of “write what you are.”

It’s something that really hits home for me, too, as someone of (VERY) mixed ethnicity. I sometimes feel self-doubt about what sort of characters I “can” or “should” be writing about. And if I’m only “allowed” to write what I know, is it really authentic for me to write about either white European-American culture OR Pakistani-American culture when I never quite felt entirely at home in either? Can I write about Costa Rican families because of my stepfather? Aussie families because of my half-sister, or Chinese-American families like my husband’s?

Tad: If you start pruning down your options from that point, it can go even further. Maybe I can only write characters with certain religious ideologies, and you can only write atheists. Maybe I can only write characters who have lived in certain places, have only a specific social or economic class, and on and on and on, until what we allow ourselves to write and vicariously experience is very narrow indeed. That can’t be right…

It’s a mixed blessing that “multicultural” has become a buzz word in kid lit in the past few years, as if suddenly (suddenly!) the cleanly segregated masses started interbreeding and now we have to contend with this new species called “other people.” What will “they” read? How will “they” relate to society? Who will write for “them”? The fact is the faces of young adult readers have always come in many colors, even if the protagonists have not. The multi-ethnic audience is nothing new. It is a shame that the industry pretends otherwise. While racial bias has always existed in Western literature (ever notice how ethnicity is often only a descriptor if a character is not Caucasian, making White Anglo Saxon the default for most characters?), at least there is now a forum for discussing it and a movement toward more diversity.

Tad: Hah. I love that “Suddenly.” Suddenly we’re left with, oh dear, the faceless “them.” It really is ironic that suddenly multiculturalism is popular, even as it’s also “othered” to the extent where it seems to merely underscore that “multicultural” means “not like me.” It’s almost just an additional minority group.

AF: It’s certainly not a bad thing to move towards more diversity in literature, and there is a place—an important one—for writing that discusses these topics themselves and lets readers know that it’s okay and normal and even good, sometimes, to worry about racial and ethnic and cultural stuff.

So, if the publishing industry has been ignoring the diverse make-up of readers until now, how is it that people from all over the world have been enjoying the exact same books for years? I’m not talking about today’s heavily-marketed, printed-in-30-languages blockbusters that are specifically created to pre-sell worldwide. I mean the longstanding, tried and true novels written when the world was a bit smaller, certainly less accessible, and nowhere near as ethnically-blended as it is today. Books like J.M. Barrie’s Peter Pan or, Jane Austen’s Persuasion, or my personal childhood favorite, E.B. White’s Charlotte’s Web. Answer this question, and you have the secret to writing for a multicultural audience.


Need a hint?


Okay, I’ll give you the answer—don’t write for race, write for people. My favorite definition in the world is for the word “humanities.” You know, the classes in high school and college that cover literature, art, music, history and dance? The definition is “that which makes us human.” That’s as multicultural as you can get, and as expressive. My novel, Hot, Sour, Salty, Sweet is about a girl who is both Chinese- and African-American, but first and foremost it is about a 14-year-old girl with a crush and a family that drives her bonkers. Sound familiar? Even if you aren’t biracial?

AF: I just love this, and it’s so tellingly sad that the humanities are often the first to go when there are budget cuts in education…what then happens to our perception of ourselves as human? Of others? Of what it means to be human?

Tad: And even as I agree SO wholeheartedly with this (and YAY, Persuasion!), I find that it’s very tricky. Maybe I’ve never had to “deal” with race and ethnicity within myself — accepting my own hybridized African- and – Greek and Choctaw American has left me more open to the idea that even if it isn’t readily apparent, we’re all made up of more than one race or culture. Since my work is now scrutinized by more eyes than my own, though, I find that I get… nervous about how the race of my characters is perceived. I’ll never forget being asked by another student during my MFA program why I wasn’t “representing.” Seriously, someone wanted to know why my characters weren’t “more African American.” Who knew there was a gradient scale!

One of the reason that YA literature has had such a great appeal for me is that it uncovered the commonality of the human experience. It reminded me that everybody is ashamed, giddy, looks foolish, feels stupid, can’t sleep, gets acne or burps at inopportune times, or is so happy they feel like they can’t contain it — sometimes. We are all siblings under the skin at least once or twice a day, because humanity has some common denominators, despite its various outer wrappings.

If you write true emotions, all readers will be able to relate to them. Will you have critics? Undoubtedly. But don’t let that stop you. If the community you write about takes issue with your work, the challenge is for them to write their own stories. Encourage your critics to tell their own truths, and help you to develop a better understanding of their world. Do your research, be truthful, insightful and as accurate as you can be when writing another culture, and undoubtedly the strength of the story will shine through. Don’t let the color of your skin, or the pronunciation of your last name, keep you from writing outside the “Check one” racial identity box. We are human. We are multifaceted, and that is all the “multi”culture you need.

Copyright © 2008, by Sherri L. Smith

AF: There’s so much strength in this idea. What better way to learn about others than to teach each other, to go out there and read and research and learn? Someone’s got to be doing that research and writing, helping others learn—and the more, the merrier. Sherri, I’m so glad that you communicate such positive and constructive messages to your writing classes. It’s much more conducive to creativity and learning than insisting people stay within that “check one” box.

Tad: Exactly. I can only hope to encourage other people through my own work to step out there and find out about their own and other cultures and groups and open up dialogue about their discoveries. It really opens up worlds of potential to think that you have the right to write well any story that you choose. That’s awesome.


Sherri, thank you for stopping by. We’re feeling inspired by our conversation about ethnicity, race and writing, and we’re grateful you agreed to chat with us today!

The book is Hot, Sour, Salty, Sweet, a tasty title found at a bookstore near you as of this Tuesday! This funny – excruciating – horrible and wonderful account of Ana Shen’s 8th grade graduation dinner will appeal to everyone who’s ever been the member of a loving family — and would (sometimes) like to be (FAR far away), um, elsewhere…

Sherri’s Hot, Sour, Salty Sweet Blogtour continues! Celebrate the Lunar New Year and African American History Month with Ana Shen and her Chinese and African American families at:

February 18, 2008 @ Bildungsroman
February 21, 2008 @ The YA YA YAs
February 26, 2008 @ Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast
February 28, 2008 @ The Brown Bookshelf.

Don’t forget to join the conversation! Jump in with your thoughts and become eligible to win a copy of Hot, Sour, Salty, Sweet. And don’t miss these other thoughtful reviews of Sherri’s work.

New Year’s Rat courtesy of A. Fortis.

Good Morning Writers: This is Your Brain on Cassie Edwards


It started with the Kaavya Viswanathan thing. It got worse more recently with the Cassie Edwards thing.

These plagiarizing chicks give me the creeps. Cassie Edwards has seriously been giving me nightmares.

I don’t know why it even worries me. I never knowingly try and copy anything from anyone, I didn’t even do it in school (although yes, Mrs. Henry, in the bathroom at fourth period that one day in 8th grade, Elizabeth Williams was copying my English assignment. Sorry. I so wanted her to like me… sigh). I’m totally above board, and I know it. But I’m completely in a panic when I hear people caught copying saying it was “accidental,” and it was “unconscious.” Writing about WWII means I’m not writing in a vacuum; everybody and his dog has something to say about “the Just War” and “the most violent war in Mankind’s History.” What if I say something someone else has already said? What if my unconscious walks into someone else’s novel and goes shopping?

(My nightmares consist of a New Yorker screaming at me, and me with piles of unsold books falling on me. And they’re hardback, too… I’m going to take a guess that the Brooklyn accent is S.A.M.’s, and he’s already warned all of us in his little fold what would happen if we even had a hint of controversy about our work. Curtains, kids.)

Last week I finalized a page of acknowledgments for Novel #2, just to settle my nerves. They’re an entire page long so far, as I sought to list every book, website, magazine article, movie, photograph from the National Archives; anything that could have sparked my creativity. I almost feel like I’m trying to say, “No, it wasn’t me, it was the genius of the world that wrote this book!” But seriously: at this point, anything to stop the nightmares.

Now, just in time, the Guardian’s Levi Asher has tips on avoiding author scandals! Here are the eight things every writer should remember:

1. Do not use the word “memoir” unless you mean it.

2. If you’re not sure whether what you’re writing is a memoir or not, guess what? It’s a novel.

3. No more than half a page of plagiarism per book.

4. Don’t make up exact dates that you can’t remember. Instead, be general: “The most important day of my life was the day of my son’s birth, in the summer of 2005 …”

5. Just say no to sending a friend out in public with a wig as you.

6. If you’re in a flame war and you’re about to go sock puppet, take a 10-minute break and go to a coffee shop without a wi-fi facility. Maybe the walk will cool you down.

7. Go ahead and make up dialogue. Everybody except Tom Wolfe does.

8. Pick a name. “Benjamin Black is John Banville” is just not a good look.

I’m going to start doing a little yoga before bed. If nothing else, the extra stretching will help me dodge the falling tomes…

What is the sound of two pencils snapping?

Listen!
Can’t hear anything?
There’s a reason for that. This is the sound of Women at Work.
It’s a bit quiet ’round here this week.

Well, if you manage to get your head up, don’t miss this month’s Edge of the Forest, starring The Class of 2k8, and the usual happy melange of book reviews, interviews, and more worthwhile news in children’s literature.

Okay, we’ve all joked about the Cassie Edwards thing, and even had a very fine Toon Thursday about it. NPR even got into the act — twice. But did you realize that all the publicity has actually helped the ferrets? Romance readers/writers = good people. They raised $5,032.75 to further the romantic lives of ferrets and all animals. That’s some serious money, peeps. I will never mock romance novels again. (Until next time.)

Writers: Don’t miss some great contest ideas for this month! UK based Writer’s Magazine sponsors an annual writing for children competition. The theme for March is bullying, and details will be updated on their website closer to the date.

Another UK gem is The Belmont Poetry Prize, whose contest has children as the judges. Details here.

Finally, I know a. fortis will get a kick out of this one — a contest for children’s stories set in Wales. The Alexander Cordell Literature Competition is looking for children’s short story set during the Industrial Revolution in “Cordell Country.” Never heard of Alexander Cordell? Find out more about himhere, and good luck!

Happy cold/wet/rainy/sleety/where’s Spring?!/ weather to you!

Ferreting (Heh) Out Plagarism

There’s been a story I’ve been following along with the folks at GalleyCat about a romance author who lifted quite a few passages from other works (including a work about …ferrets. Let the bad puns continue!). That started quite an intriguing discussion on the difference between copyright infringement and plagiarism.

According to Candy: “…plagiarism is an ethical issue. It’s concerned with what’s right and what’s not. Copyright infringement is a legal action…It’s concerned with what’s legal and what’s not.”

That’s the cut and dried interpretation. Personal ethics is a whole ‘nother ballgame, folks.

When the Kaavya Viswanathan story broke awhile back, S.A.M. circulated a polite little letter around his circle of writers and told us that while our editors would make every effort to defend us in public if anything like this ever happened, we should know that if we ever made them — or him — look bad, we could really kiss our contracts goodbye. “DON’T even let it come up,” he warned us.

My second novel is historical fiction, and you can bet I have an attribution list that will make it look like I’ve written a book report — but it’s important to me that everyone read the first books — out of print, not widely circulated — that sparked my interest in the topic. How could I do any less for those who wrote before me?

You never stand on the top for long unless you acknowledge the shoulders of those upon whom you are standing.

In Case I Haven’t Mentioned It…

So many people have graciously asked about my book, I’d like to give you an update:

1. It’s for YA. It’s about a girl who really wants to outshine Emeril (and erase Rachel Ray) on the TV cooking show circuit. (Respect to the Big Man from the Big Easy and the perkysmiley little cook, but don’t we all??) This from the flyleaf: Seventeen-year-old Lainey dreams of becoming a world-famous chef one day and maybe even having her own cooking show. (Do you know how many African American female chefs there aren’t? And how many vegetarian chefs have their own shows? The field is wide open for stardom.) But when her best friend – and secret crush – suddenly leaves town, Lainey finds herself alone in the kitchen.

With a little help from Saint Julia (Child, of course), Lainey seeks solace in her cooking as she comes to terms with the past, and begins a new recipe for the future.
Peppered with recipes from Lainey’s notebooks, this delicious debut novel finishes the same way one feels after a good meal – satiated, content, and hopeful.

2. It’s meant to come out in June. From what I’ve heard from others, that date is rather amorphous; often authors find their books in bookstores before the release date, and are shocked. I’m expecting one of you bookseller types to tell me if you see it — since I’m here in the UK, and it won’t be sold here until possibly after the Bologna Book Faire, which is when Secret Agent Man takes advantage of an Italian vacation plus work to sell the foreign rights to his client’s books.

I really apologize for all of you who have looked for the book and felt a bit out of it when you couldn’t find it. Mea culpa!

In Case I Haven't Mentioned It…

So many people have graciously asked about my book, I’d like to give you an update:

1. It’s for YA. It’s about a girl who really wants to outshine Emeril (and erase Rachel Ray) on the TV cooking show circuit. (Respect to the Big Man from the Big Easy and the perkysmiley little cook, but don’t we all??) This from the flyleaf: Seventeen-year-old Lainey dreams of becoming a world-famous chef one day and maybe even having her own cooking show. (Do you know how many African American female chefs there aren’t? And how many vegetarian chefs have their own shows? The field is wide open for stardom.) But when her best friend – and secret crush – suddenly leaves town, Lainey finds herself alone in the kitchen.

With a little help from Saint Julia (Child, of course), Lainey seeks solace in her cooking as she comes to terms with the past, and begins a new recipe for the future.
Peppered with recipes from Lainey’s notebooks, this delicious debut novel finishes the same way one feels after a good meal – satiated, content, and hopeful.

2. It’s meant to come out in June. From what I’ve heard from others, that date is rather amorphous; often authors find their books in bookstores before the release date, and are shocked. I’m expecting one of you bookseller types to tell me if you see it — since I’m here in the UK, and it won’t be sold here until possibly after the Bologna Book Faire, which is when Secret Agent Man takes advantage of an Italian vacation plus work to sell the foreign rights to his client’s books.

I really apologize for all of you who have looked for the book and felt a bit out of it when you couldn’t find it. Mea culpa!